Better :) Getting creepier. I don't know what running time you're imagining for this, but 3 minutes is looooong. I suggest you decide right now on a duration for your film - say 2 mins max - because one of the reasons this piece still lacks a bit of energy is because I think it's just too drawn out and long - with the climatic stuff coming too late and probably not lasting long enough. What do you think, chaps? Time to be realistic about this in cg terms - and then commit to a duration, which will help your composer too.